高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；过渡词和衔接词不饱和，文章行文较为流畅；文章词汇表达灵活恰当，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。

football is my favorite game. I remembered the first time I played it with friend was on the way home. By chance that I found a football lies on the road and I took it to my friends. Since then I started to love this game. I joined the school football team and got regular training for every week. We always held match while the break between the classes. Bake Ham is my idol because he is a successful football player and that inspires me to aiming to be a professional football player in the fruture.