正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;语言不流畅。
Dear George Hi!I hear you want to know how much price for my household hotel. Then,you will be decided to stay in here for a period of time this summer. Well!Welcome to come to my hometown.You are so lucky!My household hotel is very expensive and pretty cool.Oh!For accommodations,the cost of single room household is 30 per person for a day,double room household is 20 per person for a day.For eating,you will live with household owners so you can eat Chinese food together. Also,you can order some you want to eat food and you can cook yourself.In the entertainment,you can bathing, swimming,and hiking.It's full in colour.More important,I hope you can close to understand and feel the atmosphere of the Chinese family. To sum up,I hope to respond you some question.I also hope you will enjoy the wonderful trip in China.If you have any question,you will contact me.I will answer you enthusiastically. Yours, Lee Jian