2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

As is show in the picture.the same flower is in the set of drawings.The comparation is big change in the two drawings.What is difference between with the two?The only one change is protection.One of the drawing show that the flower keep no changes in the protection.It is healthy.But it is dying in the rain when no protection. The implied message of the picture presented to us,only people who no protection is real-powerful man.In our lifes,however,a lot of people can not be better in no protection.They are child alike.The disadvantage overweigh the advantage.we must be an powerful person with no protection. Finally,it is important to protect ourselves but by others.