语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;文中拼写错误稍多,词汇表达贫乏。
In our daily life we always believe what we seen,actually is ture but if we seen the thing don't think about it to get a conclution immidateiy is not wise.we alway said the white lies is allowed is what we can foreigve .somethings is not just like face need we to think about it useing our wise ability
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