错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Football that I am favourite sport. The god gave me a chance that make me be fond of playing football by chance. I used to find a football in my way which goes home,then I played with my friends. Since than,I loved deeply playing football. I often train and match with my friends all together. bakemamu is my favourite football star and I wish I can be a professional football player one day.