错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Football that is I am favourite sport. The god gave me a chance that make me be fond of playing football by chance. I used to find a football in my way which goes home,then I played with my friends. Since than,I loved deeply playing football. I often train and match with my friends all together. bakemamu is my favourite football star and I wish I can be a professional football player one day.