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Football is my favourite sport. The god gave me a chance that make me be fond of playing football by chance. I used to find a football in my way which goes home,then I played with my friends. Since than,I loved deeply playing football. I often train and match with my friends all together. bakemamu is my favourite football star and I wish I can be a professional football player one day.