2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨。

With the developing of our society,it is popular for us to use computers to do many things we want to.However,as we all know that the mind we focus on the computer should be project. Many people show their points with the computer are love but hate.We can use computer to do many things we are intrested in,such as study online,shopping online,chatting online and enjoy movies online and so on.These are what we love.But there are so many young guys are too crazy on online games to face the real life.There are so many unknown fields online that we cannot judge if they were wrong or right for us. So in my opinion,before we use the computer we should pay attention to judging it,and try to deserve the temptation.