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At present, many commodities exist the phenomenon of excessive packaging. Excessive packing refers to the heavyweight, and volume is too large, and the cost is too high, etc. I think the reasons for this phenomenon the excessive packaging: firstly, false advertising is widespread. Secondly, sales prices are high. Once again, there is something wrong with sales way. Finally, packing's material quality is bad. In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including excessive consumption of water and energy, and Unnecessary waste of land. To solve the problem, it's necessary to take the following measures. First, the laws must limit the excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise person's awareness that excessive packaging doesn't equal to high quality and call for packaging recycling.