英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9779
要求:
题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

At present, many commodities exist the phenomenon of excessive packaging. Excessive packing refers to the heavyweight, and volume is too large, and the cost is too high, etc. I think the reasons for this phenomenon the excessive packaging: firstly, false advertising is widespread. Secondly, sales prices are high. Once again, there is something wrong with sales way. Finally, packing's material quality is bad. In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including excessive consumption of water and energy, and Unnecessary waste of land. To solve the problem, it's necessary to take the following measures. First, the laws must limit the excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise person's awareness that excessive packaging doesn't equal to high quality and call for packaging recycling.

会员评论0个评论)
飞絮婉
金币:2

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:88.0仰望xingkong

人气:91发布:2013-05-26

得分:87.5GuloOmimi

人气:53发布:2013-11-26

得分:86.5生如夏花DDKathy

人气:55发布:2013-08-07

得分:85.5孙鹄

人气:45发布:2013-11-20

得分:85.5羊羊D

人气:48发布:2013-12-09