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Memo To: Mary Chen From: Li Ming Re: New Year’s Party Date: December 23, 2008 There are different opinions among people as to new years party. Some people suggest that hold a lovely party is importantce. They thank it's interesting. Other people suggest that hold a simplely party. They thank our company is economical. But yours decision is importantce. It's the time for mary to hold a party. Because it is up to you to hold a party. Mary decide on hold a simplely and lovely party. She thank it's not too luxury. please tell me yours decision. You tell workmates and me for time and place of final decision. You tell what need for preparation. I hope new years party is very interesting. It give evryone for suprised. Yours LiMing
