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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
评语:

从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As the saying goes,"Men can not be judged by their looks".I think this is very classical.In the modern society,more and more people pay attention to looks.Some people think the most important is one people's look. On the one hand ,the looks of workers is the signal of thier company.So,the ministry of company very strict with their carrer.On the other hand,this measure lead many people to lost their job.I think this situation is unfair to these people. As for one people,the looks is important same as his life,but if you don't have knowledge and skill,you are a loser.For exmple,the writer of A Brief hisory of time HuoJIn,he is a deformity,but his very pouplary in the international .All of people forget he is a deformity,they only remember he is a great scientist.In fact,the looks is not the key pf people's life,abundant knowledege and good accomplishment is very important.That's your biggest wealth and it's priceless. All in all,the looks is not important.

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