2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

过渡词和衔接词不饱和，文章行文较为流畅；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉，要加强拼写；文中从句使用不丰富。

The National day is round the corner，our motherland has had 66th birthday，it is the 67th.Throughtout history，the motherland had misfortunes ever,nevertheless had great accomplishments.67years ago,the Communist Party gaint the political power from kuomintang.At first,china as a young tree.under the guidence of communist party ,became a tree reaching the sky .Our economic is bomming，citizen live happyly .Although we are still one of developing countries,i firmly believe that our motherland will be developed country in the future.nowadays,i make my best progress repay our motherland.Do hope our gonna more rich and strong.