2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

作者高级词汇量积累不足，部分单词有拼写错误；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

The National day is round the corner. Our motherland has had 66th birthday and it is the 67th.Throughout history，the motherland had misfortunes ever,nevertheless had great accomplishments. 67 years ago,the Communist Party gain the political power from kuomintang.At first,china as a young tree.under the guidence of communist party ,became a tree reaching the sky .The economic is bomming and citizen happyly live .Although we are still one of developing countries,I firmly believe that our motherland will be developed country in the future. Nowadays,I make my best progress repay our motherland. I Do hope our gonna richer and stronger.