2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中从句数量过少；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；层次分明，但过渡词欠缺。

The National day is round the corner. Our motherland has had 66th birthday and it is the 67th.Throughout history，the motherland had misfortunes ever,nevertheless had great accomplishments. 67 years ago,the Communist Party seize the political power from kuomintang.In the beginning,China likes a young tree.Under the guidance of communist party ,she became a tree reaching the sky whose economic is boomming and the residents happily live .Although we are still one of developing countries,I firmly believe that our motherland will be developed country in the future. Nowadays,I make my best result repay our motherland. I Do hope our motherland gonna more wealthier and stronger.