2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但拼写方面要再接再厉。
With the deverlopment of technology and science, people can learn knoledge from various of ways and it's made possible for people to study anywhere, However, which also leads to such a penomenon that more and more people no more than foucs on how to get knowledge and ignore how to apply what they learn to practice. Maybe there are people believing that knowledge is the basic of doing everything. I don't deny it. However, as my view, knowledge is measure but practice is the key to it. Just as Sumuel Johnson's famous remark,"General principles must come from books,which ,however, must be brough to the test of real life" I think so. If we cannot bring what we learn to the test of real life, the knowledge is usseless. Only we learn to apply what we learn from books to practice, can the knowledge make a difference in our life and can we make success in the future.