注意:
1. 开头和结尾已为你写好(不记入总词数 ); 2. 词数100左右。
简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
I‘m looking forward to see you again.You can by plane or train to get my hometown,and take the NO.45 bus in the airpport,and then get off the bus in the last station.If you by train, i will take you in the station. There are many activities for us to do,for instance,we can go sightseeing in the near iland、swim、run、 climb mountains and see the sea foods.