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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2997
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视。

用户练习作文:

With the deverlopment of technology and science, people can learn knoledge from various ways and it's made possible for people to study anywhere, However, which also leads to such a penomenon that more and more people no more than focus on how to get knowledge and ignore how to apply what they learn to practice. Maybe there are people believing that knowledge is the basic of doing everything. I don't deny it. However, as my view, knowledge is measure but practice is the key to it. Just as Sumuel Johnson's famous remark,"General principles must come from books,which ,however, must be brough to the test of real life" I think so. If we cannot bring what we learn to the test of real life, the knowledge is usseless. Only we learn to apply what we learn from books to practice, can the knowledge make a difference in our life and can we make success in the future.

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