作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;文中从句使用不丰富。
i have a good friend,her name is jessie,she is a very beautiful, kind person.she also always help others.we are go to school together every day.after school,we like to play table tennis in club,then go home and do homework.she is one of my best friends of all.we love each other.this sunday,we will going to swimming