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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36941
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分55.0分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;语言不流畅。

用户练习作文:

My best friend Speaking of the friend, I have to speak of my best friend: Lily. She is 9 years old and likes to wear skirt. She is very beautiful. We usually go to school together. She waits for me every morning. And she waits for me every night to go back home. I have to say "Thank you so much" to her. From now on, our friendship has been through 3 years. Both of us cherish this. I remembered last time I felt terrible. She noticed this and asked me what's wrong? I told her that something wrong with my stomach. She decided to take me to the doctor, and helped me to get the medicine. I am so glad to make friend with Lily.

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