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从句数量偏少；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中高级词汇不足。
time goes by so fast, it seems just yesterday that i came to the university. in the past four years, i have learned a lot , not only from the teachers but from my roommates. the treasuries of good words and golden thoughts that i earned from teachers will lead me toward a bright future. also, the tears and laughter i have shared with my roommates will be remembered and cherished for the rest of my life. the study in college is quite different from that in high schools, there are no more teachers breathing down your neck , it is more likely that yuou should
