单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a good friends, She is a pretty girl . She have a high nose , two bright eyes . She very like laugh , when she laugh , all of our friends feel very sunshine . More times , I like she smile quiet , she looks very beautiful at that time .