单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend, she is a pretty girl . She has a high nose , two bright eyes . She like laugh,when she laugh , all of our friends are very happy . More times , I like a smile quiet with her,she looks very beautiful at that time .