希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a good friend, she is a pretty girl . She has a high nose , two bright eyes . She dose often laughing out loudly ,when she laugh , all of our friends feel very happy . More times , I like a smile quiet with her,she looks very beautiful at that time .