2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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my dear friend,i was very excieted when heared you going to visit my hometown,i am intruduce my hometown to you and make you fall with my hometown. In the first,my hometown invirment are beautiful,shuan as moutuns,river.when you come here,we going to clam the moutuns,we will standing in the top look at whole city，the sight wonderful and make happy.if is a hot day,we can going swimming in the river，which extrem cool,moreover,there are fish in the river,maybe we can going fishing that ia a good idear. i deem that you are fond of my hometown,i am expect you come here quickly.