注意:
1. 开头和结尾已为你写好(不记入总词数 ); 2. 词数100左右。
词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
I‘m looking forward to seeing you again.You can by plane or train to get my hometown,and take the NO.45 bus in the airport,and then get off the bus in the final station.If you by train, I would take you in the station. There are many activities for us to do,for instance,we can go sightseeing in the near island、swim、run、 climb mountains and enjoy the sea foods.