2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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my dear friend,i was very excieted when heared you going to visit my hometown,i am introduce my hometown to you and make you fall with my hometown. In the first,my hometown invironment are beautiful,shuan as mountains,river.when you come here,we are going hiking (climbt mountains),we will standing in the top look at whole city，the beautiful landscape and make we enjoyable.if is a hot day,we can going swimming in the river，which extrem cool,moreover,there are fish in the river,maybe we can going fishing that ia a good idear. i deem that you are fond of my hometown,i am expect you come here quickly.