文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文中从句的数量太少;过渡词和衔接词不饱和,文章行文较为流畅。
This term, i have a new english teacher. Her name is Jessie. She is a tall, thin girl with two big black eyes, with dark curl hair hang on her waist. She likes smile very often and her smiles looks like beautiful flowers. She is an agreeable and good-tempered teacher. My classmates all like her very much, so do i.