文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强。
This term, I have a new English teacher. Her name is Jessie. She is a tall, slim girl with two big black eyes, with dark curl hair hang on her waist. She likes smile very often and her smiles look like beautiful flowers. She is an agreeable and good-tempered teacher. My classmates all like her very much, so do i.