小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

i have a good friend,his name is LGX,he is handsome tall and thin, i like him.we meet each other everyday, we talk everything, he's very nice. he teaches me japanese, we usually go out together, we have a good time. and now he is my husband. l love him. we have son and daughter. we are happy family.