希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;从句使用量太少;建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
i have a good friend,his name is LGX,he is handsome tall and thin, i like him.we meet each other everyday, we talk everything, he's very nice. he teaches me japanese, we usually go out together, we have a good time. and now he is my husband. l love him. we have son and daughter. we are the happy family.