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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11494[网页划词已开启]
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Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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Steven Jobs, one of the greatest person in IT world, dropped out his college after studying in it for 6 months. and this is one of the best decision he ever made. Therefore, many people think that college may not be so important since Jobs can be so successful without graduating from his college .However, excluding Steven Jobs, numerous successful people in IT are high-educated and graduate from a great college or university. This shows that college can make a big difference on us if we work hard in there. Meanwhile, the case of Jobs shows that go to college is not the only way of being expert in what you do .You can still be permanent and outstanding through your hard working.

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