小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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She name is Tu Xiyv. She is 11 year. She like learn and look book,but she dont'n like maths. She wear brown clothes and yellow shoes. She often play with me. Ten my with she usually chat and take a walk She is young and vear sunny,and can dance. Because make people love. She is my good friend. I like she.