正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart and agreeable. My friends all like my dog. Do you like it?