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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力。
Be cautious in saving money With the development of the economy, the price of commodities is getting higher and higher. Thus, some people choose to buy things in a way that can save money. In my opinion, it's reasonable to form a habit of saving money, but we can't refuse to spend money in the necessary occasions. Actually, we should save in most of the time, because it has been a good habit since long time ago. There is no need for some people to buy so many useless goods and live an over extravagant life. after all, the resource of the world is limited. However, sometimes, we can't be absorbed in saving money and ignore the reality. "price is equal to quality" can be used in most occasions. Sometimes, we consider it has the same quality as the original one, but it's often not true. I have once realized the anger of buying a defective T-shirt. One day,when I shopped with my mom on the street, I was attracted by the advertisement"buy one and get one free", so we selected two t-shirts. but after my mom washed the clothes, the picture on one of the t-shirts fell down and another t-shirt had color fading! so, remember, be cautious when you save money, take the value and quality into consideration, because the clothes in sale may only be a strategy for the producer to deal with their defective products. In conclution, we must justify whether we need to save money during our life, if something is really worth that money, then buy it, if not, just stop.