2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the developping of our society,it is popular for us to use the computers to do many things we want to.However,as we all know that the mind we focus on the computer should be objective. Many people show their points with the computer are love but hate.We can use computer to do many things we are interested in,such as study online,shopping online,chatting online and enjoy movies online and so on.These are what we love.But there are so many young guys are too crazy on online games to face the real life.There are many unknown fields online,so that we cannot judge if they were right or wrong for us. So in my opinion,before we use the computer we should pay attention to judging it,and try to resist the temptation.