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2.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 词数100左右
句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework. They have so much homework to do every day. And they feel stressed too much. About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them(in their studies)It’s difficult for them to get on well with their parents .The other twenty percent of them think they are weak in health .They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities. Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad , we want to take more exercise to keep healthy .We will try to do our best and we also want to play on our own.
可可英语 - 划词释义
