考研作文：关于领导

作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

Sweet and graceful,the two physically-challenged men showed in the picture help each other catch the common dream,that is tough if they are not about to learn how to corporate.This world needs more corporation rather than person-hero. Generally specking,being a person,who can do a set of difficult things by himself and always defeats the vicious guy to save the world,is amazing and wonderful.But the realities is that we are the common person with limited power and ability so that there is little likelihood for us to the same thing like a super man.However,although the hero will not touch our shoulders,the gad gives us another way---corporation--- to "save your world" .A good case coming into my mind is a company,which must ask the employee to corporate with each other by an efficient way to get the more profitable revenue.The phenomenon is not isolated.It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence. The last but not least,we can not only attain our target but also learn more from others and collect friendship from the process by corporation.