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语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
My hometown visited, the most interesting place I am in great passion to take the visitors to see must be the Sky-Moon Lake, which is located in a local middle school. It is quiet, thousand times as beautiful as a beauty, soft, and always has the magic to bring us the sense of peace, along with the trees beside it and the birds above of it. In spring, it is in the color of green, the wave moving; then in summer, it becomes crowed for its function of producing wind; then in autumn, it would be charmingly decorated by the yellow of the leaves; and when eventually comes to winter, it is still quiet, elegant, alike the aristocrat woman in Europe.
