题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文中用词稍显贫乏;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;多多注意文中错误的句子;请注意分段。
Nowadays, the computer become the human being parts. If we level the computer or mobile phone, we will feel we lose a loving thing. So the computer become our partner. you like the way, like it very much. would you like it? yes, no? hello, morning!company, family, home love like little some things nothing anything