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作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
My hometown visited, the most interesting place I am in great passion to take the visitors to see must be the Sky-Moon Lake, which is located in a local middle school. As a romantic location with imaginations, it is quiet, thousand times as beautiful as a beauty, soft, and always has the magic to bring us the sense of peace, along with the trees beside it and the birds above of it. Attibuted as it is, it turns on different apparents in four seasons. In spring, it is in the color of green, the wave moving, comparing with its becoming crowed for its function of producing wind in summer. Then in autumn, it would be charmingly decorated by the yellow of the leaves. And when eventually comes to winter, it is still quiet, elegant, alike the aristocrat woman in Europe.
