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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
简单句偏多了；请作者增加词汇丰富度，加强拼写检查；语言不流畅。
To KPOHsales My name is hu bin,I knew about your company's new product whose number is 5670 during the estbinsion on 15th-22th December.I'm interested in that product.Please your company sends one price list and instruction to us.Thank company's compration in advance .I hope we can establish businss relationship. from hubin
