小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

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My grandfather at the age 76, he very old. He like Autumn, because he like look yellow leaf. And he like take a walk with grandmother. He hus a lot of wrinkle and white hair. He hus same brown clothes and green shoes, he vary like wear that. He like me is very much, and I also often help grandfather, for example: I usually at night help grandfather wash the dishes. I like my grandfather!