小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中从句使用不丰富。

My grandfather at the age 76, he very old. He like Autumn, because he can look yellow leaf. And he like take a walk with grandmother. He hus a lot of wrinkle and white hair. He hus same brown clothes and green shoes, he vary like wear that. He like me is very much, and I also often help grandfather, for example: I usually at night help grandfather wash the dishes. I like my grandfather!