小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

My father is very busy. In morning, father gut up at 6 o'clok, that very good morning! And at 7 o'clok, he often go to work, but I just gut up. In noon, he can go to home,and at 11:30 he can gook rice at home. After having lunch, my father can take a walk with my mother. At 12:30, it's time for work, he go to work in a hurry. In night ,father go to home at 5 o'clok, that very late. He can cook and pick up the younger brother. At 7 o'lok, it's After eating dinner, he is very tirad. Therefore I can help father wash the dishes. I like my father!