小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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Chinane'se National Day is here we are, so I have seven my holiday! Frist day, I before do homewolk, that very many. The next day, I have finished my homework, becuse I am very relaxed. And I can go to boostore with my younger brother until the forth day. In forth day, I invitation friend go to my home play. In fiveth day and in six day, I with younger brother watch TV and play at home. In seventh day,it's last day, so I inspect home wolk and have a good rest. And at holiday afternoon, I often take a wolk. At holiday right, I always help parent wash the dishes, that very make sense. I like this time holiday!