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小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:46浏览次数:3104
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用英语描述下我的假期,字数在100字以内.
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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中能使用多样的词汇表达,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Chinane'se National Day is here we are, so I have seven my holiday! First day, I before do homework, that very many. The next day, I have finished my homework, because I am very relaxed. And I can go to bookstore with my younger brother until the forth day. In fourth day, I invitation friend go to my home play. In fifth day and in six day, I with younger brother watch TV and play at home. In seventh day, it's last day, so I inspect home work and have a good rest. And at holiday afternoon, I often take work. At holiday right, I always help parent wash the dishes, that very make sense. I like this time holiday!

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