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With the frequency of globalization and commerlialization accelarating, the public can't be satisfied with current resources any more, causing the phenomenon of over deforesting and over hunting. Being confronted with this deteriorated situation, some pessimistic burghers believe that we could not make contributions to the overwhelming disaster, while other optimists opine that as long as we take tiny action we could outperform yesterday. For the former opinion, they believe that huamn beings ' power and capability is inferior to the mysterious nature. Because we suck precious and invaluable springs of resources by selfish and inhumane approach, like killing rare animals' heads and peeling their skins, strong and powerful nature finally retaliate our society.Although this sounds reasonable, yet if we make endeavor to decrease exhaust fumes and plant more trees rather than over fishing or murdering a various of animals this world could exhibit another appearance in what we can't imagine. For the latter viewpoint, the more citizens take measures, the more beautiful the nature will be. As the well-konwn saying, faith moves mountains. For instance, no matter what the environment, developed countries and developing ciountries collaborate to elaborate a perfect plan to change our green house and rising sea level. Many international environmental organizations hold together to amplify the ponderance of polluted environment, which brings unexpected deeds. Consequently, there is no deny that our inhabitants are pursuing the ecosystem and green environment. In conclusion, despite human's power is negligible, when people unite together could benefit and develop the nature better. Not only we should protect nature but also respect her. Only by this ideal believe can we make our offspring thrive.
