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作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。
With the pace of globalization and commercialization accelerating, the public can't be satisfied with current resources any more, causing the phenomenon of over deforesting and over hunting. Being confronted with this deteriorated situation, some pessimistic burghers believe that we could not make contributions to the overwhelming disaster, while other optimists opine that as long as we take tiny action we could outperform yesterday. For the former opinion, they believe that human beings ' power and capability are inferior to the mysterious nature. Because we absorb precious and invaluable resources by selfish and inhumane approach, like killing rare animals' heads and peeling their skins, strong and powerful nature finally retaliates against our society.Although it sounds reasonable, yet if we make endeavor to reduce exhaust fumes and plant more trees rather than over fishing or murdering various animals this world could present another appearance in what we can't imagine. For the latter viewpoint, the more citizens take measures, the more beautiful the nature will be. As the well-konwn saying, faith moves mountains when opportunity knocks. For instance, no matter what circumstances, developed countries and developing countries collaborate to elaborate a perfect plan to change our green house and rising sea level. Many international environmental protection organizations hold together to amplify the ponderance of polluted environment, which brings unexpected deeds. Consequently, there is no denying that our inhabitants are aiming to the ecosystem and green environment. In conclusion, despite human's power is negligible, when people unite together could benefit and develop the nature better. Not only we should protect nature but also respect her. Only by this ideal method can we make our offspring thrive.
