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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6008
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
评语:

文中从句的使用的有点少了;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇表达不够丰富,但部分高级词汇用的比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

My school is very good, and have the 3 floor. First floor, hus 5 classroom and 3 teacher's Office, but my classroom be not in. Second floor, hus 3 classroom, one art classroom and one library, I ofen go to library, I like book! Third floor, hus 4 classroom, 4 teacher's office, one music classroom and one computer room, and my classroom at from left seaond. Besides, it have big playground and after the playground. In playground, me can physical education class and play with each other. In after the playground, hus 2 restroom and Plants and flowers. Although that small, however I like my school!

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