文中从句的使用的有点少了;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
My school is very good, and have the 3 floor. First floor, hus 5 classroom and 3 teacher's Office, but my classroom be not in. Second floor, hus 3 classroom, one art classroom and one library, I ofen go to library, I can look book! Third floor, hus 4 classroom, 4 teacher's office, one music classroom and one computer room, and my classroom at from left seaond. Besides, it have big playground and after the playground. In playground, me can physical education class and play with each other. In after the playground, hus 2 restroom and Plants and flowers. Although that small, however I like my school!